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One of the best war poems I have read Sathya - - and needs to be in war anthology book - - - descriptive - intuitive - and composed masterfully..... well done from Fay.

I have become my own enemy. I do not care for any enemities. ' mein khod i jab khod ki dushmon banie huye dushmono ka dushmoni se mera keye kam' Thanks dear Sathya for this piece.

God has gone away in disgust at the atrocities man commits against man. man is the only animal that kills for vicarious pleasure ruthlessly. i wish your voice reaches God, and he sends someone again to destroy evil. brilliant work.10

I could'nt agree with you more, this is a crazy world of greed gone mad, not enough lets have a war. It is so easy so impersonal with misiles and bombs. Sathya well written, keep it up we have too. B ob

that is a place called, life you get freinds who are praying to see you fall....what a prodigy poem

Very well written my friend. Brutally honest, but nontheless it is sadly...too true. We are living with enemies, all round us, the problem is.... we never know who, or what they will be. Keep writing~! Your friend.....Anne

A VERY GOOD AND PRAGMATIC POEM

I love this powerful message, really good, although I don't agree that God has left us :) !

Thanks! It gives a great message!

hello, God is now scared of printing units in different shades and colours, dumpsters needed.. Printing machines will attack even gods too.. watchful.. (joke) .. fear not... die like a soldier dont die many deaths... living with enemies.. from experience I can tell you, tough a task...... great 10... read my magnetic signals when time permits..

Humankind is behaving and performing completely different than the desire of God. Humankind is using their freedom and sovereign power in favour of devil or satan. Thanks Sathya for sharing this piece with us.

Already in satanic domain..but what's the solution? 10+++++

i like this one a very well written concept with touching message...good job.. Ency Bearis

I am truly touched by your word imagery in this piece - Sweet talking foxes/ words showering flowers. In my humble opinion, a powerful message, superbly presented

Very necessary treatise.Well done! (For your cosideration) , When I was in the military, we wore undershirts depicting an American cartoon figure, Pogo Possum uttering the famous'We Have Met The Enemy and He Is Us'.

sweet talking foxes besetting you Their words shower flowers While their minds grind swords >>>>yeah, we didn't know who really true to us, , , a wonderful piece, , , thanks jhane

wish u touched upon the enemy within all of us creating these problms to the world!

So very true, these days you never know who is against you. A good Write. Tango.

Fascinating poem. A definite '10'!

often 'assasinations' work; sometimes voting will do. i find the best wars are fought with the Spouse. you get piece, lol, after getting a piece.