James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Monday, December 19, 2016

Left Over Love I Must Bare Comments

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The hurt and scar's you bring to me,
But by my love could heal.
Open out for all to see, through what
My heart can hold.
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Sarah Mkhonza 19 December 2016

The poem is so good, I am not sure I can get to its depth. I see the lament for the love gone where only left overs remain. I love the fact that there is a lease that remains so the feeler can go back and look even though it is just remains. It is like when we have lost a loved one to whatever, we feel so lost and forget the lessons and laughs that once were. I felt this poem was trying to get us to redeem the past in some way. Thanks for challenging our minds with this subject. Very well written.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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