You should have left me there
in my lonely
For I barely noticed I was alone
until you disrupted my days
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in my lonely in my loneliness perhaps may be slightly better lady DO READ MY POEM FOR WOMEN NEVER RUN AFTER A MAN May be late but it may help
'For I barely noticed I was alone until you disrupted my days and interrupted my fantasies' - Oh my friend Susan, these lines are so disheartening and poignant! Cheer up, my friend, better days lie ahead! May you have the desired warmth more from natural intimacy than from the 'firing furnace'!
Such a powerful poem Susan about lost love. This is portrayed well. We don't know what we don't have but once we have had a taste of it that's when we long to have it again especially that it tasted so good. This is definitely going to my favorite list. I like your style of writing.
Loneliness and old age both are well perceived and expressed in this wonderful poem. Dusty book keeps printed words as memory for future and still in loneliness we read these words. An amazing poem is wisely penned and shared.10
Sir KumaramanI MAHKUL- - has given an apt comment He is one of the best poets of PH MOST REGARDED BY ALL POETS OF PH