Friday, January 2, 2009

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I can no longer breathe.
I can no longer take this pain in my heart.
I can no longer live with out you.
But what do you care, your the one who left me
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

this sounds similar to the divine comedy..brilliantly written..amazing poem!

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Kiran Raza 02 January 2009

wow. this is very deep and emotional. it hurts to know the one you love does not love you back. you expressed this feeling in your poems in such words that no one else can speak. well done! ! !

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