Saturday, May 25, 2019

Led To Greater Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

I refuse to wait for a song of salvation
I must take the moment at hand
For music mocks time,
And I am no ones pawn
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Bill Cantrell
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Jennifer Birchall 30 May 2019

Blues is trying to steal you away from the faithful poetry which you write. A wonderful poem dear Bill.

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Magnifico 25 May 2019

I reiterate Sandra's critique.

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Sandra Feldman 25 May 2019

Nice presentation of the demands of poetry and music. One who is not a musician cannot have this vision which you have so beautifully personified and clarified in an intense and very truthfully way. A very different poem, that presents a very interesting subject, very well handled in a most poetic and artistic way. Reaches far.

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Bill Cantrell 25 May 2019

Thank you dear Sandra, a very different poem is always my goal, music used to be my whole life, now I realize that there is something better

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2019

Taking a moment of music at hand right at now is definitely very interesting. She is faithful and forgiving in nature and this motivates mind entirely. This poem is very nicely and excellently penned...10

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Bill Cantrell 25 May 2019

Thank you my friend Kumarmani, you are always kind in your comments

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