Thursday, March 22, 2007

Leaving You Behind Comments

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My heart starts to fade away,
As you come to mind more, and more each day.
No longer do your eyes mean anything,
For now they are completely gray.
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Kayla Jo Trimble
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Shane Clawson 19 November 2007

Ouch! This poem is deep and emotional. Makes me want break out in tears, kayla. Great poem, with a edgy story rythm to back it up. All together it makes a perfect poem. Thanx.

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