Saturday, May 23, 2009

Leaving This House Comments

Rating: 5.0

These walls speak a million words,
This house holds several secrets,
This floor has held many a footsteps.
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Rosalita Fern
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If those walls could speak what stories they would speak. I fell into your sadness. The poem is bitter sweet in that your next place will be happier for you. The last line lifted my heart and wanted to sing! Excellent work Rosalita. 10 Karin Anderson

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If those walls could speak what stories they would speak. I fell into your sadness. The poem is bitter sweet in that your next place will be happier for you. The last line lifted my heart and wanted to sing! Excellent work Rosalita. 10 Karin Anderson

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