Sunday, April 24, 2016

Leaving The Paradise Comments

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I remember entering a place when i was four,
smiling, curious, excited to start a new life,
after entering the smiles gradually turned to tears,
i no longer wanted to go there,
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shrutika kahale
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Anita Sharma 11 July 2016

brilliant work, loved and liked

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2016

Slowly the situation changed! Thanks for sharing.

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Shrutika Kahale 07 May 2016

thankyou so much for going through my work and appreciate it

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Shrutika Kahale 22 May 2016

thankyou edward for placing your comment.

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Halin Roche 26 April 2016

Missing the school days terribly... nice n emotional... thanks shrutika

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Shrutika Kahale 27 April 2016

yes, we enjoyed those days together, but it wont ever return!

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Akhil Raveendran 24 April 2016

Memories are dangerous things. You turn them over and over, until you know every touch and corner, but still you'll find an edge to cut you.” - Mark Lawrence my favorite quotation..

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Shrutika Kahale 24 April 2016

true, thankyou for reading

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 April 2016

You refresh my memory to my happy school life with this amazing poem. Thanks for sharing Shruti.

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Shrutika Kahale 24 April 2016

my pleasure, thankyou indeed

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