Holding my breath
At the bottom of the sea
Where I keep my secrets
In a treasure chest.
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Wow, Annabel, I really like this one. Great idea to leave sorrow in the deepest depths of the oceans behind. I like the images used here. Very well written
You have such an artful way of writing, that is refreshing and different. I love the image here too, of locking sorrow in a chest beneath the waves and surfacing like a new being..splendid idea too.