Thursday, April 4, 2019

Leaving Me You May Go Far Away Comments

Rating: 4.1

leaving me you may go far away
Your remembrance is prominent to my heart
And It'll remain still
I'll not forget you ever.
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dipak adhya
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Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2020

The title is eye catching, and the words following are heart touching!

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 April 2020

A nice poem on love. Beautifully crafted to make an interesting reading. Congrats.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 April 2020

nice poem...great impact on my mind.. clear 10 it is your choice to break the promise and undo all the commitments in the present scenario what have we done to it intact? it wasn't in fact from the day one, you were different let us part happily and not lament Hasmukh Mehta

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Rocky 06 April 2020

To be in love but not be together is unbearable

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2020

You may not feel me But I must I must touch you all the days and night As you must not be able to go far away Leaving my heart. The struggle of a loving heart. thank u dear poet. very good poem..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 April 2020

A sweet composition! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 April 2020

Leaving me yea leaving me in thy heart of love leaving me to hold you again by heart leaving me to hold yo again by love whole day and night till the last breath......../// nice and lovely poem penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Rajnish Manga 06 April 2020

Love can be objective and love can be subjective. It depends on how much you care. Thanks and Congrats for this day's Poem of the Day.

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Congratulations poet Dipak for being featured in POD. " You must not be able go far away leaving my heart" Beautiful...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

But I must I must touch you all the days and night As you must not be able to go far away Leaving my heart...........I am mesmerizrd by these words. Want and want not, wsh and wish not. So complex! Loveliest said and worded. A 10 Full Score. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 May 2019

leaving me you may go far away.. Comes out right from heart, appeals to the heart.

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Savita Tyagi 29 April 2019

Beautiful poem wanting to hold on to a loved one yet not wishing to be a stone of their path. Complex are human sentiments!

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Ruma Chaudhuri 07 April 2019

The feelings of true love remains in the core of the heart. It doesn't depend on other who loves or not. Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 April 2019

you may go yeah; may go far away beyond the horizon with the air with the breeze to the greatest space but here look a piece of love lives into me before your beautiful heart birth .............///// beautiful poem, beautiful expression +++++++++++++++++++10

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Jennifer Birchall 06 April 2019

Letting go is one of the hardest things in life, truly touching poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 April 2019

Heartiest congratulations on poem of the Day. The profound poem with it's steady flow is simply touching.

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Bharati Nayak 06 April 2019

leaving me you may go far away I must not hold your hands You may not feel me But I must I must touch you all the days and night As you must not be able to go far away Leaving my heart. - - - - - In true love, distance is never a distance.Physically lovers may be far far away, but love resides in heart. Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2019

'I'll not forget you ever! 👫😍🤩 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prabir Gayen 06 April 2019

Congratulation....dear poet....very beautiful poem... Thanks...100000++++++..I will visit again.. thanks

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M Asim Nehal 06 April 2019

Congrats for the honours POTD, This is what love is all about, care, feeling and remembrance, crafty poem.....10+++

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