Friday, May 12, 2017

Leaving Me Comments

Rating: 4.0

A blush,
A flutter down,
A parting of the ways.
The trees in cherry beet
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douglas lewis
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Mj Lemon 12 May 2017

Douglas, this is brilliant. Leaf or leave? One interpretation can provide a humourous interpretation. Another, with a focus on the metaphorical, can cause sadness to bubble up. A great work; a 10.

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