Sunday, November 6, 2016

Leaving Home Comments

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Moving through life, choices are presented
Sometimes where we live is decided for us.
Then there comes the mortgage journey
Sometimes one and other times many.
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John A'Hern
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Kathy Van Kurin 02 December 2016

John A'Hern, I just read a second writing of yours, if that is ok. Life is all about transition it seems. I know that It has been for me. Homes come and go, people too, stages within nature and our health. This poem spoke to the reality of how impossible it us to permanently possess material things. But our hearts message is a inner voice of love, family and relationships within the soul and without. Blessings to you..............Kathy

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John Ahern 03 December 2016

Hi Kathy, thank you so much for your feedback as well as finding the time to read my poem. Your feedback shows that you understood the poem itself, thank you for that.

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