Monday, April 30, 2007

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I see your footsteps by the door
I start to cry and even more
when your footsteps started leaving
I was tricked into believing
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Latasha Gregory
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i really like this. it's really good. the last stanza is my favorite. thanks for sharing it.

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Bill Thomas 08 February 2008

Wow, it says so much, & with a great conciseness that shows careful crafting. Thank you. Keep it up!

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