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I loved this moving poem my friend... David 10

David what a profound truth you have captured in this poem. I felt I was reading a passage out of my own life. Wonderfully written piece of poetry David. Thank you so much for sharing. Pam

David: This is a lovely sentiment. I especially like: 'Think of the seeds of sadness, you are about to sow.' I think this is one of your older poems, but it is very well done. Keep up the good work, and I think you are my #1 reviewer! alicia

You paint a very sad picture here David, the pain of watching someone you love walk away from you without an explanation. This pain makes the heart weep and hinders the body from a good nights sleep. Very sad indeed, excellent poem, thankyou for sharing. A big (10) from me---Melvina---