Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Leaves Turning Grey Comments

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Like a carcass lays, an ancient tree,
he tried to pray, through celestial seas,
but his spirit flew just like a bee.
Everyday he gazed at crying clouds,
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Soren Valentine
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Aria Siren 20 September 2012

I like this :) But I have a weakness for trees. I particularly enjoyed the last two verses. Very nice job.

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