under the dogwood
leaves cover
a cat’s grave
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each one is a gem and threaded together they make for an enchanting necklace....
You have such tremendous imagination at work in everything you write. I was not surprised that you could turn each haiku into a small gem of perfection. (smile)
Wonderful lines, great words you have here, Ben..and oh, I really love these lines.. widow’s diary pressed rose petal the last leaf .............................a touching line, indeed
I have read these over and over and they all have their own charm. Such a variety of images your readers are totally spoilt. My favorite is fallen leaves, circusing in the grass, merry-go-wind. How clever is that! Great work Ben. 10 Karin
Beautiful read.Lively and lovely ink.