The artist leaned in slowly
to his daughter’s sculpted visage,
placed a slender leaf of gold
across her ceramic brow
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Perfect picture here of parental pride in the gift of an offspring - - a golden piece of penning and thank you for this shine in my day........... from Fay.
Your words easily portray the movement going on. In other words, this is like a mini-video of a scene from real life. Alive and full of feelings ending with a lovely painted mother and child. Very well done.
Amazing, the tender and compassion you show in your writing is like a fine vintage and becomes only more rare the farther our world progresses... it is truly a joy to read your works.
The artist can never truly capture the tenderness of maternal love - though, I must admit, in this poem, he makes a pretty wonderful fist of it. Another beauty from a favorite wordsmith. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
What a beautiful poem. Tender and very expressive of fatherly love. A 10 indeed, Sir Robert. May you have a very happy Christmas season. Richard
wowwwwww a beautiful canvas you paint -10 anjali