Wednesday, August 14, 2019

Leaves Listen In Hush Comments

Rating: 5.0

Green getting so lush
Birds in welcome sing from bush,
Leaves listen in hush.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 18 August 2019

A rhyming haiku of great beauty describing the impact of spring in Nature!

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 August 2019

Rhyming haiku, yes, I don't know what Japanese say about it. But I'm sure the original Japanese haikus have rhymes, and good rhythm as well. We mostly see the translations. Thanks for the feedback.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 August 2019

A beautiful haiku that captures the wonders and beauty of nature. Great imagery.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 August 2019

Thanks for liking the Haiku dear poet Rose Marie.

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