Thursday, May 10, 2018

Leaves In The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Those slurping sound of leaves
As the first runnel runs down
Pulling them along its way;
Sticking to mud, turning over
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Perdita Young 11 May 2018

Sticking to mud, turning over And over, settling inside ditches They turn from green to gray; - - There is something to lament in the wet fallen leaves that have lost their life, with untold tales in the dirty mud. A very good poem for share.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 May 2018

My heartfelt gratitude. Inspired by wonderful comment. Thanks.

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 May 2018

A beautiful poem that captures the leaves falling in the rain. Well penned.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 May 2018

Thanks very much. Feeling good that you enjoyed my poem.

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