The emtpy hallways, the lonely corridors
Bar the attempt for any thoughts
Of future hopes, future dreams,
Instead reviving those memories
...
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Delightful imagery, tremendously enjoyable read. Very Well done. Continue the fine work S.S.Sandok
This is really very good. One of your best! Hmm... undertones of death, depression, fatalisticness, eternity... but the word 'leaves' has this rather unexplainable connotation for me that pretty much kills the mood! Think Belle & Sebastien, 'Get me away from here, I'm dying'