Sunday, November 18, 2007

Leave Shoes Outside Please Comments

Rating: 4.5

build me a poem like a Japanese house
stark black words set against
crisp white paper wall
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Mary Havran
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Con Nie 27 January 2008

Very Good. A ten! Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Lalaine Layumas 28 December 2007

In my country we do leave shoes outside (keeping home nicely) . this is a clean poem too.

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Basil Demple 21 November 2007

Fine. Simple. Elegant.

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