Monday, September 18, 2006

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Some may say I don't 'NEED'
But that I 'WANT'!
But I know what I need...
And it's you that I want.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ruby Root 18 September 2006

Hi Lawerence, Very creative poem. Tongue twister poem. Take care Excellent write.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

Another superlative work, Lawrence. Excellent!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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