Saturday, March 29, 2008

Leave Me To My Element Comments

Rating: 3.5

leave me i beg to my element
let me my mistakes make
let me shameless myself correct
till to my allure at least i try
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hamid kareem
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Snéha Soni 22 August 2008

This is what I call freedom of being oneself, learning life in one's own way by being himself..without the boundaries and restrictions.. I really appreciate the way you have have depicted the message...

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Sarah Atieno 12 May 2008

Wow! What a nice and precise message. I'd recommend this poem to parents who are overprotective. Keep it up.

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Lady Lyn Rosete - Buchan 09 April 2008

I love the message of this poem, almost something I want for myself..be left alone and learn things on my own. Nice one.

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Gene Orr 08 April 2008

As above vereine, as you know. Very nice indeed. I enjoyed this text allot. Easy flow.

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Malini Kadir 07 April 2008

Rare subject well written loved this effort......take care!

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Suicide King 03 April 2008

Nicely written, and a very strong concept to write a poem about, very odd but yet tantalizing.

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Broken Peaces 31 March 2008

That was a good write nice content and a good subject matter giving it nine Chris

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Yonela Mali 31 March 2008

this is beautiful, i like it a lot

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