leave me i beg to my element
let me my mistakes make
let me shameless myself correct
till to my allure at least i try
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Wow! What a nice and precise message. I'd recommend this poem to parents who are overprotective. Keep it up.
I love the message of this poem, almost something I want for myself..be left alone and learn things on my own. Nice one.
As above vereine, as you know. Very nice indeed. I enjoyed this text allot. Easy flow.
Nicely written, and a very strong concept to write a poem about, very odd but yet tantalizing.
That was a good write nice content and a good subject matter giving it nine Chris
This is what I call freedom of being oneself, learning life in one's own way by being himself..without the boundaries and restrictions.. I really appreciate the way you have have depicted the message...