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i don't know how to describe these lines....great......very nice

Hello my paisano! Here, thoughts are jotted down with ink of noble passion. Magnanimous write. Yes possessiveness is boon and bane to the society. Engulfing me, wounding me, killing me alive Stabbing my soul so fatally Enslaving my vertebra. When somebody is possessive we complain it he is too selfish. If somebody is not possessive we say he cares me not. Yes human relations are intricate. Anyway by all means appreciate the poets investment of passion. If gotta grade this poem 10 +++++++++++

Very nice, my friend. Often my favorite type of poetry is thoughts meant for a journal colorfully painted by a poem. I think it is a poets job to show the vulnerability of he human race as well as the deep truths that lie within. Good job.