Wednesday, February 22, 2006

Leave Me Nought Comments

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The memories are still the same
they never age from what remains
the colours fade to black and grey
then simply seem to fade away
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Charles M Moore
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Will Barber 01 June 2006

The poem is all true. A mystery, not an answer - hence, religious in a sense. This is a very fine vision, and the beauty of the language is - well, entrancing. Just a stunning work. As memory fades, do we? If they fade away....

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Patricia Gale 08 March 2006

Memories some good some sad. But alas they are all reminders. Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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