Wednesday, January 3, 2018

Leave Me Be Comments

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I sit here, yes, in these four walls,
I sit here and I wait,
For time will surely pass this way
And make me leave, as if I'm late.
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Sarah Persson
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Jeannette Heywood 22 March 2018

very emotive and relatable.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

A TEN Vote and many many +++++, for your fantastic poem, Sarah

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Sarah Persson 04 January 2018

Thank you Sylvia for your comments. All the very best to you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 January 2018

You; re most welcome, Sarah! Sincerest, Sylvia Frances Chan

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

LAST PART: This is such an amazing creation from your deepest inside, Sarah, I have read with greatest pleasure, because I read so many things I was in too. Fascinating poem and be sure that in your future lies all that introvert part which was inside constantly, outside, in the free air. Thank you so much for sharing this excellent poem with the best end rhymings.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

SECOND PART: so life keeps going on, we fall, we are very disappointed in life and with our life, we write all down, papers and papers we filled with words, BUT at ONE certain moment, we will open that door to OUTSIDE and there I am now and you will be there too.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 January 2018

FIRST PART I hade been there too, dear Sarah and look what I have become now: a world traveler. I started with Silent is the Entrance exactly like you now, but we, you and I and the rest of the world are Survivors of Life,

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2018

This place is where i hide away! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 January 2018

Sarah, such an interesting write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Sarah Persson 03 January 2018

Thank you Bernard. I don't think the feelings of the introvert are known or understood as much as the exrovert.

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