Monday, March 21, 2005

Leave Me Alone! Comments

Rating: 3.9

I’d like to awake
Without being woken
To just sit and think
With no word spoken
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Scarborough Gypsy
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kAy BaRCeLon 01 August 2007

I think this is a classic heh A year after reading it for the first time, it still makes me smile... Hope your environment has improved since...

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Jerry Hughes 11 August 2006

Truly relate Gyps, this is good...

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Scarlett Treat 08 February 2006

Who of us who have families hasen't longed for 'a place' to escape to, to get away from everything that pulls at us? ? ? Well Said. Scarlett

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Moya Levy 25 January 2006

lol brilliant! Know that feeling well! Moyaxx

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Alice Vedral Rivera 03 July 2005

I like the way you write about the things we all go through. Another wonderful poem. avr

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Elizabeth Russell 30 April 2005

Yes I can completely relate to this poem - I have an office now - just for me!

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Scarborough Gypsy 26 March 2005

Philippa, I agree with your comments and have done some fine tuning on the mitre. I think you will see an improvement now. Thanks for that. SG

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Linda Preston 25 March 2005

Get's my vote - for reader identification.

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Philippa Lane 25 March 2005

I really like this poem - and can relate to it. I think I would check on the last few lines and maybe alter them a bit because you lose the otherwise perfect rhyming. Well done!

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Peter A. Crowther 21 March 2005

Don't we all feel like this sometimes? :)

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