Go
Leave me alone
Yeah you heard me. You
took part of my life i'll never
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Pain! ! Stain! The curtain is down. Writing out your heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Go away! Oh no please stay! We rock on that swing day and night! Great expressions. Congratulations.
Well penned. Wow, what a poetic monologue. I loved it and I mean to translate it into the Russian language. Thanks in advance.
Bonds are of numerous types. One may think that every bond is breakable, but in reality some are unbreakable. One such bond, candidly expressed in a wonderful poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
But the last line changed the plot. 'Wait, Please stay! ' is the truth about your feelings for him. Nice poem. Congrats.
Nice poem.. well expressed kind of Cry for Freedom..! ! Can relate to it right away! ! Thanks for posting Poet..10
Amy, I was rooting for you all the way! And then that last line! Very clever! Perhaps tragic.
A poem written with experience of regretted action. Moral lesson: Think it out before you decide to avoid regret. Kudos to the poet.
Very innovative! I love your use of punctuation here to add emphasis. What I love even more - as others have said below - is that this poem is a realistic depiction of just how erratic and indecisive love can make us. Great write, and a well deserved poem of the day.
a poem of indecision and how we show our emotions? ..............well penned Amy
Amy, such a good poem...congrats for being chosen...10+++
I know what you mean, good poem.