Friday, January 16, 2009

Leave Me Alone Comments

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Leave me alone
Yeah you heard me. You
took part of my life i'll never
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Suzy Marebra 02 February 2018

I know what you mean, good poem.

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James Mclain 02 February 2018

Amy, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2018

Pain! ! Stain! The curtain is down. Writing out your heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Savita Tyagi 02 February 2018

Go away! Oh no please stay! We rock on that swing day and night! Great expressions. Congratulations.

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Valentin Savin 02 February 2018

Well penned. Wow, what a poetic monologue. I loved it and I mean to translate it into the Russian language. Thanks in advance.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 02 February 2018

Bonds are of numerous types. One may think that every bond is breakable, but in reality some are unbreakable. One such bond, candidly expressed in a wonderful poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 February 2018

But the last line changed the plot. 'Wait, Please stay! ' is the truth about your feelings for him. Nice poem. Congrats.

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Siddartha Montik! 02 February 2018

Nice poem.. well expressed kind of Cry for Freedom..! ! Can relate to it right away! ! Thanks for posting Poet..10

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2018

Amy, I was rooting for you all the way! And then that last line! Very clever! Perhaps tragic.

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Babatunde Aremu 02 February 2018

A poem written with experience of regretted action. Moral lesson: Think it out before you decide to avoid regret. Kudos to the poet.

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Nika Mcguin 02 February 2018

Very innovative! I love your use of punctuation here to add emphasis. What I love even more - as others have said below - is that this poem is a realistic depiction of just how erratic and indecisive love can make us. Great write, and a well deserved poem of the day.

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Tom Allport 02 February 2018

a poem of indecision and how we show our emotions? ..............well penned Amy

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 February 2018

Amy, such a good poem...congrats for being chosen...10+++

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Kite Remedy 29 January 2009

that happens in our world, Amy.. Nice write..

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Catrina Heart 17 January 2009

wow! ! ! what a poetic monologue you made here...10

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