Thursday, August 29, 2019

Leave It For The Starry Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

When lips vibrate like the strings of a tuned guitar,
and air fails to propagate musical titillating waves,
do not ask the singing heart not to sing any more.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2019

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A hunting expression has been made on love, kiss and lip.Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 August 2019

Magnificent write from the Poet's Pen of a one of a kind Poet. Another masterpiece. Onto my Poem List.

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Khalid Saifullah 30 August 2019

A great poem, every line shows mastery of the poet.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 August 2019

Listen to and to adore, great lines

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 August 2019

You conjured magic with this breathtaking love song, dear Akhtar Sir! I have surely enjoyed a very lot! Thank YOU! A 10 full score and much much more. Up toMyPoemList.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 August 2019

It is love when eyes feel the touch, ears begin to see who sings, and the skin all over smells the fragrance of love. This is how I felt after reading 'Leave it for the Starry Eyes'.

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