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“It was me, By now I lived with your heart in my bosom.” The boy kissed the girl and she found, Unlike wedding kiss, more warm and sound! .......Amazing romantic expression! Appreciated words written in Poet's Notes! (10)

the Poet's Notes is VERY interesting! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Off course, it should be a heart, ............................Of course........of course! ! ! :) some favorite lines: She said to the boy, “My heart is still beating in my bosom, You could not steal, I’m sorry for your failure. and: Was the bride a liar, what do you say? They are living happily, leave it, anyway! ==================================================================== and may i share with YOU, this of mine? The Downside And The Upside Of Using Lies.... [pros And Cons Of Lying; Some Advice; Short] (from 2014) Lies can seem at times necessary, but.... in the long run can make life more hairy. BUT, ... if at times no lies are spoken, you may end up with your life broken. BUT, again, .... use lies sparingly to be sure....so.... you don't depend on them for each cure. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - yours to MyPoemList bri :)

Amazing One....... Beautiful...10 on 10

Through the beats of music knowing the art of winning heart is wonderful definitely. Excellent work. Beautiful also.

Through the beats of waves of music I know the art of winning the heart with love and affection. Beautiful imagery and expression. Excellent work shared definitely.10/10

Beautiful, creative write with inspired lines that dance with a lie that made him happy!

What an integrating lie! It has glued two hearts into one! As in a fairy tale..... They live happy thereafter! So let us leave the question whether it was a lie or a truth! Great imagination Akhtarji!

What a beautiful lie and what a beautiful poem! ......................10