Leave alone
who only see the fight
as a way of resolution
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An outstandingly didactic piece on life's most pivotal themes - peace and good sense leading the sage pack...expertly spun using memorably sweet poetic turns. Congrats - 10/10!
no more poetry withstands the brutal human waves nor the cry of heaven extinguishes the jungles fires With the robins dawn sing a song and a poem from your depths. love this poem. tony
rather let the poem sing with the robins at dawn to the ears of whom understand the rituals of eternal life - - - > those are beautiful lines to close a poem and its conversation with... lovely lovely lovely! ! ! a gorgeous gazillion 10's for this gen
Thanks Dear poet Bharati Nayak, and warmly welcomed generous commentary. I hope all is well with you and those around you.
rather let the poem sing with the robins at dawn to the ears of whom understand the rituals of eternal life- - -Yes again - - -Let us sing to the tunes of this beautiful thought.
Leave alone who only see the fight as a way of resolution . Leave alone who play with the fire and think they will not get burnt- - - - Yes - I totally agree with you.
Dear M. Asim Nehal, your views are important to me, keep writing and stay blessed.
Better to leave alone such craps that only bothers and does nothing, they might be trivial in comparison to many opportunities. Thoughtful Poem 10 ++
Dear Aarzoo Mehek the way of your reading my poem is unique, I wish every reader get the message through as well as you did. many thanks for your amazing comment with warm regards..
Can't agree more Soran. Let's leave alone all the negativity and bask in the glory of nature. Nice poem.
Thanks Rose; really your time, reading, comments on this poem is the best gift I have had, wish you to Keep on the top 500 always Warm Regards
Liked the finale of this poem. Lines that give hope. Very uplifting. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Top marks! !
And yes, Poetry could not tolerate evilness instead Poetry will give light through its wisdom and insight. Powerful and insightful lines that condemn those people who instigate war, destruction and fear.
Another poetic gem that will go to my Poem List and the Poet to my Poet List Yes, those who advocate wickedness and whose minds and hearts are covered with darkness must leave alone.
thank you Valsa George your wonderful comment is the best gift I have ever had... Kind regards with Every Success
Here the poet indirectly alludes to the moral responsibility of a poet to disseminate the seeds of love and compassion for the well being of humanity. Let each poem flow with the chorus of birds, ringing the happy notes of cheer in all attentive ears! Beautiful.......!
rather let the poem sing with the robins at dawn to the ears of whom understand the rituals of eternal life Yes, let us dismiss all the scoundrels and agents of wickedness, war and rebellion who pollute the divinity of the world! No poem should voice their war cry to stand up in rebellion against fellow beings. Instead each poem should sing about the glory of life, of love, compassion and fellow feeling!
It's what poets do.