Leave All Things Comments

"Breath, my friend, / leave all things"… loved reading it on this revisit

simple and nice

…breathe, my friend. I like it! ! !

Wow I got lost in imageries. Great poem.

The rhyming scheme is so well written. The poem is indeed very beautiful

Beautiful poem of a pair of watchful eyes. Loved it.5 *s

I like the rhym in the beginning of the poem.

Thanks Michael

Very good