Wednesday, February 4, 2015

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Rating: 5.0

In my heart you live
but in my life you dont
In my dreams you live
but in my wake you leave
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Pen Anthony
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 February 2015

Reality or chimera, that could be the question, here...Simplistic yet satin smooth structural movement as well as a lyrically charged rhyme scheme...Solid Penning ~FjR~

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E Nigma 04 February 2015

Isn't it just like love to sneak on in and dismantle everything you know leaving you perplexed at how to put everything back together again? Very well crafted and precise an excellent poem.

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