Last night
I was feeling cold,
nearly dead
they said wake up
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Yeah feasting on other's purse is always delicious but living on once own money pleasures beyond quest. Try it once and see.
No you are not dead yet wake up get dressed and the car is on its way we will go to Molina Rouge your ribs we will all eat - - - - - - Our loved ones keep us alive - - A nice theme expressed with humour.
After reading your poem i felt for a while that I live in an era at least 100 years removed from now. You will know what I mean if you read some of my poems on death, a much repeated theme of my poems. I'm impressed, Poet's poet.'
think not of death u will get depresions it will come w/o notice sir
(cont.) Yeps? ? First, his ribs, they separated, then, them, they lightly marinated, Grilled three minutes on each tender side, then guests 'gobbled him up' till each was satisfied. bri :)
nearly 4 months after my first comment on this, i have (accidentally) returned; i'm glad i did. i like it more, much more i believe. and yes, i believe there is some humor, for ME at least, and...of course....pleasing Bri is what counts. to MyPoemList. (cont.)
A beautiful poem on life and death nicely executed. I quote, ....... No you are not dead yet wake up get dressed and the car is on its way we will go to Molina Rouge your ribs we will all eat Thanks for sharing.
A nicely penned piece of craft work that is so thought provoking...I like it..10 I vote
Lease of life is an adorable piece of poetry! No, we are not dead yet.......we will all eat.....Liked the stanza most! I vote this wonderful poem with a 10
o so kind of you dear DrDKS You always raise my morale thanks som make others feel dull o what the some think too much about themselves can't be helped so many poems of mie have to be read as yet Thanks doc
interesting, but i want to look at one i may understand better, or one that at least has some humor/humour or in it. or MAYBE there IS humor here? i'm not sure. bri :)
A very nice piece. I am really interested in all of the lines. God bless you
Some sweet concern from others can always give us a new lease of life! When we express concern for the less privileged by opening our wallet and donating from it.... we give them a new lease of life! Beautifully put!
THANKS ALL THOUGH BELATED I don't come to know who has said what and when
Funny profound philosophical original. And you made me hungry for buttered chicken. Great poem!
THANKS RW THOUGH BELATED I don't come to know who has said what and when
Went for another free lease Save for charity to give... Very different way of writing.. Impressive
kindness always pays we wake at will thanks for d reads so quick response admired it
It gave me another lease today I went to yet another free feast and have added years to life how many more years will be my strife? It's a great philosophical piece of poem, a charming poem. Loved it. Thanks a lot for the sharing, 10++++
sir long time no c r u annoyed at me may be if so sorry now u never read me
GOOD POEM BUT LOW VOLTAGE BUILD IT UP PLEASE