Saturday, December 5, 2015

Lease Of Life Comments

Rating: 3.4

Last night
I was feeling cold,
nearly dead
they said wake up
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me poet yeps poet 15 May 2021

GOOD POEM BUT LOW VOLTAGE BUILD IT UP PLEASE

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me poet yeps poet 20 April 2021

many have to read yet do

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me poet yeps poet 21 March 2021

OLD RATING BUT STILL BEST

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Varsha M 11 June 2020

Yeah feasting on other's purse is always delicious but living on once own money pleasures beyond quest. Try it once and see.

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Bharati Nayak 10 January 2019

No you are not dead yet wake up get dressed and the car is on its way we will go to Molina Rouge your ribs we will all eat - - - - - - Our loved ones keep us alive - - A nice theme expressed with humour.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 January 2019

After reading your poem i felt for a while that I live in an era at least 100 years removed from now. You will know what I mean if you read some of my poems on death, a much repeated theme of my poems. I'm impressed, Poet's poet.'

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 February 2019

think not of death u will get depresions it will come w/o notice sir

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Prabir Gayen 29 December 2018

Good poem well executed...........

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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018

(cont.) Yeps? ? First, his ribs, they separated, then, them, they lightly marinated, Grilled three minutes on each tender side, then guests 'gobbled him up' till each was satisfied. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018

nearly 4 months after my first comment on this, i have (accidentally) returned; i'm glad i did. i like it more, much more i believe. and yes, i believe there is some humor, for ME at least, and...of course....pleasing Bri is what counts. to MyPoemList. (cont.)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 July 2018

A beautiful poem on life and death nicely executed. I quote, ....... No you are not dead yet wake up get dressed and the car is on its way we will go to Molina Rouge your ribs we will all eat Thanks for sharing.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 03 July 2018

A nicely penned piece of craft work that is so thought provoking...I like it..10 I vote

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 May 2018

Lease of life is an adorable piece of poetry! No, we are not dead yet.......we will all eat.....Liked the stanza most! I vote this wonderful poem with a 10

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o so kind of you dear DrDKS You always raise my morale thanks som make others feel dull o what the some think too much about themselves can't be helped so many poems of mie have to be read as yet Thanks doc

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Bri Edwards 22 May 2018

interesting, but i want to look at one i may understand better, or one that at least has some humor/humour or in it. or MAYBE there IS humor here? i'm not sure. bri :)

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Oratile Diratsagae 11 May 2018

A very nice piece. I am really interested in all of the lines. God bless you

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 April 2018

116 HITS GIVES A POET A GREAT FEELING

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Valsa George 02 April 2018

Some sweet concern from others can always give us a new lease of life! When we express concern for the less privileged by opening our wallet and donating from it.... we give them a new lease of life! Beautifully put!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 October 2017

THANKS ALL THOUGH BELATED I don't come to know who has said what and when

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Richard Wlodarski 01 October 2017

Funny profound philosophical original. And you made me hungry for buttered chicken. Great poem!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 October 2017

THANKS RW THOUGH BELATED I don't come to know who has said what and when

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Rini Shibu 30 September 2017

Went for another free lease Save for charity to give... Very different way of writing.. Impressive

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 September 2017

kindness always pays we wake at will thanks for d reads so quick response admired it

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 September 2017

It gave me another lease today I went to yet another free feast and have added years to life how many more years will be my strife? It's a great philosophical piece of poem, a charming poem. Loved it. Thanks a lot for the sharing, 10++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 January 2019

sir long time no c r u annoyed at me may be if so sorry now u never read me

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