Thursday, February 6, 2020

Learning To Skate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone,
I'm the solitaire person at the town's artifical pond
Early in morning, I have come to learn to skate
With my brand new skate
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Kevin Patrick 12 February 2020

Like Kim, skating was something I wasn't fit for, but reading this makes me feel its something to try on my life's bucket list. I love this poem because it is the triumph of persistence and determination. What beautiful memory you have, I love reading about the experiences of others it makes me feel connected. Great work Lee-Ann!

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Richard Wlodarski 09 February 2020

Ah yes! I remember those good old days. Lee Ann, thank you so much for triggering those memories. What a wonderful poem!

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Kim Barney 09 February 2020

I never could skate very well. I fell through the ice once when I thought it was thick enough, but it wasn't. Luckily, the water was only up to my knees, but, oh, was it cold!

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Luz Hanaii 06 February 2020

So nice, I've never skated, I could see you skating gracefully.

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Kostas Lagos 06 February 2020

Loved this one! 10! Bravo LeeAnn

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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