Saturday, October 31, 2009

Learning To Love Comments

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Waking up this morning, I saw the
Promise of anew day, life as its- is
Beautiful and that’s what we desire
But like the rising sun comes this
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Marieta Maglas 02 November 2009

beautiful triple simile: ''But like the rising sun comes this Special person-like a flood our daily Constitution is swept aside………. Like the rainy season, you place the thickest Cloud in my conscience, and rain on me with your Unmatched acts, '' nice poem, well penned with deep thoughts.....10+++

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Obinna Eruchie 01 November 2009

Emotionally fine lines you have penned.

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Eyan Desir 31 October 2009

Interesting and fine lines there...

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