Saturday, July 29, 2017

Learning To Live Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will now learn
To live again
I will wake to
Clock of rooster
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Richard Wlodarski
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2022

We are always learners till we touch the deadline of this precious life. Your excellent poem can be very much generalized. Top score and to my favourite!

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Richard Wlodarski 30 August 2022

And we continue to learn in the afterlife. Dillip, I am greatly flattered and honoured by your very positive response. THX ever so much!

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Susan Williams 29 July 2017

I will now learn To live again- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -This should be our mantra every morning. This is our challenge, this is our debt. I will wake to Clock of rooster - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -I love the way you put this and it does lend itself to the new atmosphere we must surround ourselves with as we learn to live again. I will partake In ritual Morning reading In sun shining And my basking Vitamin D - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -] Sounds like Son worship to me! ! ! That Vitamin D reference here was very charismatic to me- -Christ is the best source for all good things, vitamins for the soul I will take time to pray To the Almighty God Spiritual Guidance - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ] the best way to start a day, sir, aligning ourselves with our Creator and asking for guidance through all the tricks and traps of the wicked and assistance in recognizing the plenitude of opportunities to help our fellow travelers.. An awesome write, my friend! 10++++++++++++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 30 July 2017

Wow! ! ! I love what you've done with the commentary! ! ! Susan, your very positive and insightful feedback will go a long way in assisting me with some of my new goals. You always put your heart and soul into both your poetry and your feedback. For this, I am truly grateful. Thank you so very much for thinking that this poem is awesome. And for the 10S.

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Rajnish Manga 29 July 2017

Most of us would like to live again to pursue the path of righteousness which in the normal course of life we had just ignored or shelved for future. Thanks a lot.

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