Monday, November 12, 2012

Learning To Fly Comments

Rating: 4.5

She sits lonely on the balcony,
Screaming ringing in her ears,
Looking back she remembers,
Her lovers betrayal.
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Tammi Tomlinson
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Karla Bell 12 November 2012

This poem made me yelp.... so many parts to this, I feel I need to ask loads... which to me makes a great poem, I only hope this is not a reality for you... and if it is your ability to transfer thought to words, is fantastic...

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