Wednesday, March 1, 2017

Learning To Fly Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hey, I hit a record high
Because of you I learned to fly
You made me live and gave me wings
Instead of chunky diamond rings
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Julie Smith
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Daniel Jones 29 March 2017

Ratnakar said it perectly in his comment, i love that concept of giving wings, not diamonds rings, an outlook on life more precious that material belongings. beautiful poem, Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 March 2017

You made me live and gave me wings Instead of chunky diamond wings. Marvelous conceptualization coming out of positive approach. Thanks for sharing.

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