Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Learning How To Breathe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your kisses still burn on my lips
Your voice still echoes in my ears

I still feel the traces of your fingertips
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Delwen Doyle
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Michael Manners 09 July 2008

i'm no good at commenting on poems, but this is an excellent poem, I give it a 10!

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