* Learning Curve Comments

No clue what inspired you to right this. Flow was good with interesting title.

Actually Lee I hate bras too! Naked indeed, she had a perfectly good shirt on, that had a little bit of water spilled on it. Seriously, you have succeeded to impress me with your stunning new version of your poem. 10 again. Karin Anderson

Wow, incredible. Each line flowed with perfection right up to the conclusion. When I reached the end I realized you couldn't have written this poem any better. Learning curve indeed. A title true to its content... and I liked the seductive nuances that you used as adjectives. I'm favouriting. Thanks for sharing.

Welll written curve...but all I can say is every one and the cats mother has had an experience like that...even Lady Chatterly. Thanks for the read regards

lessons in living... landmarks in adolscent experiences...?

Brings a reality to pubity, and awareness

how young were you Lee? :) ...just curious :) well done!

It's good. Might agree with Alison on the topic of punctuation. Just a few commas somewhere. or a full stop after heat wave.

You have described your titillating learning curve with subtlety and finesse in this sweet poem about adolescence and desire. My only criticism is your lack of punctuation. Punctuation can be such a wonderful aid to comprehension and interpretation. You should try it sometime. Great poem though. Love, Allie x x x x

Messageof poem is good to learn the lesson on the curves.......................a good write.............

the subtle hints of a blossoming romance well protrayed!

intriguing moves to explore the elegance..well implied...but I think to be shy? ah..ah? .............10

I think that this is very beautiful, discreet but sensual. Nice intermingling of subtle hints. I enjoyed the read, even at my age! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love Ernestine XXX

Interesting one! wonder why u said, shy?

You did a good job. It's well written and doesn't blurt things out. It leaves some mystery. Some guessing too. Not too much too fast. Nice work.DC

fantastic poem, well done thanks a lot

shy obviously not Lee does not sound so good write--- (do read mine FLOWERS OF OF LOVE (haiku)

A cleverly articulated beautiful poem with meaningful title. Nature is a great teacher and our bodies have a lot to learn from it but with the civilized ego this curve has broght this process to a halt. Enjoyed this thought provoking poem. You are an acknowledged poet and thanks for sharing this great poetry. CP

Interesting to say the least. Those special innocent moments says it all. Puberty breaking out in full bloom. Got to love it 10++

shy? naw! ! 1 good write nice