Sunday, August 19, 2018

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Learning hard lessons through laughter, tears and pain
Understanding me, you, our blindness our distress
Loving you but not feeling respected, I declined to walk your way
You refuse to see, forced to make the same mistakes
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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2019

Learning hard lessons through laughter, tears and pain, a powerful opening of a thoughtful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 April 2019

Thank you for reading and commenting. Sometimes things between so called friends don't turn out right.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 August 2018

Loving you but not feeling respected, I declined to walk your way You refuse to see, forced to make the same mistakes Judging, projecting blame on others, on me, never on you....... real love shows itself in due respect.. for eachother. when you dont respect me, no fun in telling me that you love me. fine theme.. all those who fall in love should read this.. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 August 2018

Luz, another great write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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