Wednesday, October 5, 2016

Leap I Did! ....[inspired By ' Peeping Tom ' By Valsa George, Who Inspired Akhtar Jawad To Write ' Reply Of Peeping Tom To Valsa George With Due Apology. '; Very Short, Enou Comments

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With Valsa ever on her guard,
i crept into her flowery yard...,
dressed in black in dark of night,
and was rewarded....with pure delight!
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Bri Edwards
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AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA laughed out loud when reading this! too funny lololol

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Muzahidul Reza 24 December 2017

but then her husband spotted me. he spotted me in the potted tree.. wonderfully penned, liked it, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Kim Barney 08 October 2016

Enthralling. Now I have to go read the two poems which inspired this!

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Nosheen Irfan 08 October 2016

What a delightful write! It made me laugh heartily. Thanku for writing n sharing. Valsa is a darling. I enjoyed reading hers too. That's a really witty piece. Enjoyed thoroughly.

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Annette Aitken 07 October 2016

Thanks for the chuckle Bri....this made me laugh out loud.....

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2016

but, i STILL love this site, and (some) of the people here. bri :)

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