Sunday, October 11, 2009

Leaning Tower Comments

Rating: 4.5

I was shaped like the swirling clouds
And had a mind to figure it out
And i was so lonely as well
With an inconvienient self
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Lubna Hazeem
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Marieta Maglas 15 October 2009

nice meditative poem, nice self-portrait......................

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Herman Chiu 11 October 2009

I chose to read this poem randomly, and I find that I liked it a lot. I like the use of the rhyme sometimes, as it does not get in the way. Overall great poem!

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Lubna Hazeem

Lubna Hazeem

Manama, Bahrain
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