Saturday, July 30, 2016

Leaning On My Fender Comments

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Tires rolling to a stop in the shade on somewhere road.
A gravel bi-way speckled by the light
Filtered by the pines from way up high
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Edmund Strolis
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Theodora Onken 15 August 2016

Utterly delightful....think maybe many of us, if able, need to get out in nature like you have - and commune with nature...it is so good for the soul. Thank you for sharing this most beautiful gem!

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Sarah Persson 31 July 2016

You make it feel like I know that road. Beautifully written. Thanks Eddie

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Pamela Sinicrope 30 July 2016

Nice scenery the speaker has inserted himself into as he leans onto his fender. I think I need a little of this myself. Thanks for sharing this beautiful bit of writing. Well done.

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Edmund Strolis 30 July 2016

Thanks Pamalama, halfway into writing I thought of Kelly Kurt. So many of his sentiments share these simple moments. A little influence like a nearly impercetible breeze......hope all is well.

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