Sure, you're tough and resilient -
able to keep your feelings
under control,
when everyone around you
...
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Reach out and take my hand, my grasp is ever firm, ever loyal - lay your burdens on me, I am strong for you............. lean on me....... This is very inspiring. Lovely words.thanks for sharing
When do you reach the limit of your own strength, begin to slide into your own abyss? And who will come to rescue you then? yes the last limit takes start from begining.. what i heard but here your idea about the issue is really reverse of it and really heart feeling one..love the style you own..and write melodic way..exression is heart knocking and realizing type..best of luck..10/10
Is this one of those...God made Man first, because every perfect work of art requires a rough draft, first? If so...that is absolutely, unquestionably ludicrous. Of course it's true....but i'll call it lidicrous, just the same....Excellent Work Midnight! FjR
Behind every strong man lies a stronger woman, yes? Only the strongest men sometimes don't recognise their dependence.... t x
i beg your pardon sir....trite! the poem is a great write...it is Godliness and its lure felt so deeply and expressed so well i feel its very very serious as messages go...its quite clear to a dicerning eye where the poet is taking us linda its cheers an ten...have ablessed day
An excellent poem with nice idea where the last stanza is amazing. You always compose your imagination in a dainty manner.
Thanks, Lamont - always a pleasure. Things can only get better from here!
a very good poem. best poem ever read.