Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Lean On Me Comments

Rating: 4.4

A young boy from my neighborhood came to me the other day. he was near hysteria
he said, big bro jamb just came out and i have failed woefully my parents don't know of this yet
and i really don't Know what to do, I'm confused
i did my possible best i prayed and fasted for days waiting on God i attended lessons and i prepared well for this exam
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Don Bukana
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2017

Lost in my own thoughts! ! Life! Facing the odds; but, NEVER GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sochukwu Ivye 13 October 2017

Such a piece loaded with meaning by a young mind. Brilliantly churned out thoughts, dear poet.

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Chinedu Dike 13 October 2017

Lovely inspirational poem bristling with wisdom. Thanks for sharing Don.

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Don Bukana 13 October 2017

Wow what a lovely comment... thanks so much dear

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Muzahidul Reza 12 October 2017

A young boy from my neighborhood came to me the other day. he was near hysteria he said, big bro jamb just came out and i have failed woefully my parents don't know of this ye greatly initiate, thank you for sharing the poem with us, +++++++++++++++ 10

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Don Bukana 13 October 2017

Thanks so much Reza

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Don B. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

An amazing motivational poem is brilliantly penned with expression of arrival of young boy. Amazing sharing is done really.10

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Don Bukana 12 October 2017

Thanks so much Sir Kumarmani.. I really do appreciate and civility your interest..

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I understand how you feel Don For a beautiful written poem like this makes you to understand THANK YOU FOR SHARING MARIO ODEKERKEN

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Don Bukana 12 October 2017

YEAH Mario I'd fathom.. thanks a lot.

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