Monday, August 25, 2014

Lean On Me Comments

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Please come home,
Tis heart's now a boom,
For kiss once again,
Regardless of the pain
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Mbusya Wa Mbusya
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2020

Seeing waves of sunset, Awakes pellets Of memories, Fighting and orgies Lean on me, Never shall we die. what a kind of determination and hope, hoping against death.. tony

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Chinedu Dike 15 August 2019

A beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Gabriel.

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Earnest Gatuma 09 May 2019

Poetically expressed in a proficient way. I hope your darling gets to enjoy your poem. Thanks for sharing Gabriel Mbusya.

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GABRIEL 09 May 2019

Thank you Earnest. There is a sentimental someone, beyond the intended person who see things from the side of the light.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 December 2015

Beautifully said the love and feelings.

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