Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Leaky Boat Comments

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Reading the sadness between the lines
that crack of darkness, demon eyed.
hidden there within but always ready to ignite
spontaneous and frightening.
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Jane Campion 06 August 2019

We sail with minds full of holes. It is no wonder we scream when we see everything leaking out. Thank you for commenting on my A Million Sorrows.

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Bri Edwards 06 August 2019

I especially enjoyed the last 6 lines, ESP. these: " pinning my hopes on fallen stars has always been my curse backing the horse that's lame, " my suggestion: " Andy's Girl" at Ascot in 2020! ! bri :)

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A B Faniki 06 August 2019

pinning my hopes on fallen stars has always been my curse... Insigthful poem thanks 4 sharing

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