Leaf Shine. Comments
One freshly fallen leaf, which,
among the rush of rustling many,
finds a clefty wedge, ledges
there, and catches time.
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Fay, you left no leaf unturned in the process of writing this magical piece. First class. You were up with the 'Nightingale' on this one.10/10 Regards, Ian
Wow! , what poetic skill. That's almost a scientific evaluation in poetic form.I love the way that you study each subject matter with enquiring eyes and amazing detail Best Steve 10
Wow if you can see all of this in a leaf, I can only imagine what a rose would do for you. This line is just amazing: 'Shot-silk velvet potent with inviting moves'
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8/20/2025 8:32:35 AM # 1.0.0
Stunning write Fay. Your detail knows no bounds. You capture the complexities of living art with such beauty and awe. One of your very best. 10 love Karin